What happens in the story
Milo and Ruby draw a picture invitation for their neighbour and carry it across the courtyard. A gust of wind lifts the card out of Milo's hand and it lands inside a low bush. The children stop, point and ask their parent for help. The adult reaches the card safely, Ruby slips it into a folder to protect it, and together they deliver the invitation.
It's a complete problem-and-solution story with every story grammar element in its own picture, which makes it a strong choice for longer retelling.
Who it's for
- Speech-language pathologists working on story grammar, narrative retell or connecting words like because, after and so.
- Early elementary teachers teaching problem and solution, beginning-middle-end, or writing a personal narrative.
- Parents looking for a story about asking for help and staying safe.
- Children ready for eight scenes, or older learners who need picture support for longer stories.
Skills you can practise
- Problem and solution: what went wrong, and what fixed it?
- Story grammar: characters, setting, goal, problem, attempt, resolution, ending.
- Connecting words: because, after, so, then.
- Asking for help safely with words, pointing or a communication aid.
- Comparing: carrying the card loose versus in a folder.
A 10-minute session
- Find the goal in picture 1: who is the invitation for?
- Start with the short version: pictures 1, 3, 5 and 8.
- Connect the chain of events. What made the card move? What stopped it?
- Add pictures 4, 6 and 7 to show how the children got the card back and protected it.
- Retell all eight scenes with because, after and so, then let the child tell it their way.
Make it easier or harder
- Easier: compare the first and last pictures, then add the windy moment in between.
- Harder: explain why the folder helps; more than one explanation can make sense.
- Extend: write or draw your own invitation and plan how to deliver it safely.
Try it at home
Deliver a pretend note to someone in another room with a trusted adult. Talk about what could go wrong and how to ask for help. Never encourage children to fetch things from roads, water, thorny plants or unfamiliar places.
Pairs well with
- Rain Changes the Plan: the other eight-scene retelling story.
- The Library Book: a six-scene story about asking for help, for younger tellers.
- How to use story sequencing cards.